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----CONTAINS SPOILERS!!----

Intended for readers who have finished watching season 1 of The Legend of Korra.
If you hate spoilers, do NOT read until you've watched the entire series.

You have been warned.




Legendofkorravid by ~rontufox

Exploding through her family's hut, brazenly wielding elements far beyond her age-level, wildly announcing that, yes, she IS the new avatar and the world better get used to it.  Now here's an avatar so unlike Aang!  One who depends solely on herself, resorts to brute force to solve her problems.  Yes, creators!  Give us skill, power, conceit, and spiritual neglect.  Let it blow up in her face, forcing her to cope with the fact that confrontation can’t solve everything.  Just as Aang learns too little power is detrimental to his avatar role, so too will Korra learn the same lesson about too much power.

This is the dynamic, juxtaposed character arc I expected avatar Korra to undergo during her series.
-cue wah wah waaaah and laughing sound clips-


…Yeeeaaah.


At the beginning of the season, we have a brash, over-confident bully.
And what do we have at the end?
A brash, over-confident bully.

Korra lacks growth.  Yes, things happen to her, and yes, she reacts to these things, but nothing changes.  Not her opinion of herself, not her outlook, not her approach.  She never acknowledges her shortcomings, which makes the series appear to condone them.  

Omg-1x03skytable1a by ~rontufox
"Defenseless people we want info from, Mako?  Just abuse them!"
"No objections here, flyer distributors are the scum of the earth, right?"

And it’s not only Korra.  Lack of growth seems to be an ongoing theme--Mako shifts from a somber, responsibility-ridden provider to a robot droning "I love you" left and right, Bolin the humor-wielding peace-keeper to… wait, what's he been doing the second half of the season again?  And Asami, who didn’t quite have a clear direction, delegated to a jealousy role.  Stuff happens to the characters, a few kisses are exchanged, but nothing of great consequence is revealed about them throughout the 12 episodes.

Bolin and Asami by ~rontufox
"As any sane person would do when a friend's kidnapped, I’m attributing my boyfriend's concern to being unfaithful."
"Meanwhile, I'll humor your suspicions instead of telling you to stfu and help find my possibly dead love interest."

And character is only half of a good story--the other is plot.  
The Legend of Korra has great plot points.
Pacing absolutely destroys them.

This series is, to put it kindly, end-heavy.  All the plot has been shoved into the last few episodes.  Imagine the dynamics that would have naturally followed if say, the revelation of Tarrlok's blood connection to Amon was spread backwards into earlier episodes, or his motives behind protecting the city--enough conflict for a whole season, maybe even two.  But the writers felt our time was better spent on pro-bending matches and love triangles.

Korra1x11 827 by ~rontufox
"Amon is actually my brother, and he's evil because flashbacks, I know this is must all be hard to swallow but-"
"Hey Korra!!  Let's go to the next plot point!"

12 episodes is not too short a time to tell a story--tons of series do it all the time, and quite well.  Length doesn't make or break a story, decisions about how to command that length does.  The Legend of Korra is fraught with poor pacing decisions--the biggest one being over-budgeting the amount of time dedicated to events of little consequence.  In turn, the later events are rushed, thus cheapened.  How Korra finally reaches the avatar state, I think, sums up this cheapening effect well: by feeling sorry for herself.

tumblr m5h4xrTrfi1r35igl by ~rontufox
"When we hit our lowest point, we are open to the greatest change."
"It was absolutely horrible, only being able to bend one element??  You can’t even imagine!"

Overall The Legend of Korra is a story that falls quite flat considering the potential inner conflict within Korra, and the complex social issues that front her city's problems.  Especially regretful is the lack of multiple perspectives on the struggle between benders and non-benders, the ignored driving force behind the entire plot.  Instead, we are expected to side with Korra, her friends, and the benders on principle, which isn't enough in any form of storytelling.  
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Your thoughts? =)


Screen shots from "The Legend of Korra" series, property of Nickelodeon.
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:iconmaran-zelde:
I agree with almost everything you wrote, except that Asami didn't act as jealous as a lot of girls would have in her situation. Also, what jealousy and suspicion she did show were entirely justified, because Mako did waffle back and forth between her and Korra. But maybe I'm being overly defensive of Asami because she was unfairly maligned by a large portion of the fanbase. I'll grant you that she did lack a clear direction and motive.
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:iconrontufox:
But maybe I'm being overly defensive of Asami because she was unfairly maligned by a large portion of the fanbase.
Was she? I stay away from fandoms so I wouldn't know if that's the case :XD:

I agree with almost everything you wrote, except that Asami didn't act as jealous as a lot of girls would have in her situation.
I never said she acted more or less jealous than a real person would have. The criticism was that jealousy was her only role.

Also, what jealousy and suspicion she did show were entirely justified
Again, the point wasn't whether her jealousy was justified, but that it was her only role. For example, I don't find feelings of jealousy during Korra's kidnapping unbelievable. What IS unbelievable is that it's the only emotion she'd feel and express to others. The writers did a very poor job in this regard.
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:iconmaran-zelde:
Okay, that's fair and I can see where you're coming from now. It just came off as criticism of her jealousy per se.

I do think she also felt betrayed by her father, but I agree that her main emotion was jealousy.

I stay away from fandoms so I wouldn't know if that's the case
That's smart; I should try that from now on. :XD:
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:iconrontufox:
To be honest, I think Asami would make a far better protagonist than Korra ;p If they explored her character beyond mainly jealousy, she'd be awesome. But that can be said of all the characters in my view (exploring beyond their trope).
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:iconmaran-zelde:
Can't argue with you there. :)
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~petia84 Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes - it was flat. ATLA is one of the best tv shows that I had ever seen and I'm 28 years old, and LOK is just ok.
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:iconrontufox:
Agreed. There were plenty of episodes of ATLA that I was embarrassed to watch, but when it succeeded, it soared, and that happened most of the time. It tackled complex issues and relationships without shying away or resorting to tropes, so it became very dynamic and multi-faceted.
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:icongoodwinfangirl:
I feel sorry for Asami, although her jealously in episode nine and later was annoying, but as we saw, she was right!
Of all members of the new team she suffered the most through season 1 I think. And now she has no boyfriend, one of her friends has now a relationship with him and her father went crazy and tried to kill her.
Good point with the bullying. I remember her dialogue with Tarrlok when she said he's abusing his power and he replyed she does the same. "No I don't!" Oh no Korra, you didn't attacked the announcer in the park and you didn't kicked the poor secretary arround when you were mad at his boss.
About Tarrlok's backstory: Sniff, sniff, poor boy, okay let's go and kick Amon's butt, because all those nonbenders will just believe us. You can stay here if you want, we will tell Amon about your little treachery, because it isn't possible that we'll fail and that he'll come back and punish you.
And then Aang appears and uses deus ex machina bending to help our poor crying Korra.
If she has now truly the full control about the avatar state I'm mad, cause I remember how many freakin times Aang lost control and tried to gain it
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:iconrontufox:
Ahahaha, I love this tirade.

I couldn't get myself to care about Asami despite all she goes through, I guess because her role/personality was so marginalized into her relationship with Mako. But you made me realize, Asami makes a way more interesting protagonist than Korra does.

Serious, her bullying quality irked me the entire season. Not the fact that she's a bully, I like that idea, but the fact that no one reacts to her violent nature ("Hey, chill out" or "DANG, calm down, these are innocent people!") and that there are absolutely no consequences to her violence (people don't get pissed off at her, nobody points it out to her, she never feels guilty). So basically it makes it seem the series condones her behavior, as if I'm supposed to feel she's in the right while the "bad guy" is doing little worse than she is to other people... like, what?

Your summary of the last two episodes are dead on! :XD: Everything was done out of convenience, so there's so many plot holes and lazy writing. And I don't know why I didn't realize to call Korra's regaining her bending a deus ex machina, because it certainly is. It pisses me off her plight was so pathetic (oh no, I can only bend one element now, heaven forbid, cuz it's not like everyone in the world can only bend one). It's such lazy writing and makes her look so selfish and petty. It truly did make me hate her character.

I doubt they'll let her have full control of the avatar state, because it was sort of a "desperation" type situation, but I wouldn't be surprised :XD:
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~Dreaming-of-Nonsense Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
A lot of this is true, but I feel Korra did change, at least somewhat. She thought she could beat anyone and then she learned Amon could take away bending, and she became afraid, which she didn't feel much before. She does get a bit overconfident for a few episodes after, but then again, she barely escapes Amon and is afraid yet again. As for everything being rushed, they had only one season at that point, so they wanted an ending that could be an ending to the short series OR an ending that can leave them openings to the next season. I do agree LoK does have its flaws, but so does every show, right?
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